Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Loalism VS. Patriotism

Tyler Keiser- Patriot
Kara Taylor- Loyalist




We have decided that one of the best ideas, and easiest to accomplish, would be a letter between either a mother and a son, or a father and a daughter. So we're both pretty fluid in our writing styles, thus indecisive on what we will do for sure, but this idea sounds pretty solid.



Kara and I think that the mother/son letter would work best, because of the spin we could put on each side. It would be easier and more probable.



To set ourselves apart from the text within the book, which itself is a parent-child relationship, we are thinking about maybe taking Craig's idea and recording our reading... however, if after we write our letters, we decide that we have already set ourselves apart from those readings, then we will not do anything different... and we'll just keep our documents as they are.



We haven't decided on what we will do for sure, but this is where we will start:

Letter to Patriot son from Loyalist mother

Kara is going to play the role of the loyalist mother who is offended by her son's decision to part from the king and parliament...I am the opposite role.

Friday, October 26, 2007

Midterm Practice

John Winthrop’s sermon on the boat to New England shows how highly Puritan society held themselves. The statement that they ‘shall be as a city upon a hill’ means they believe they will be the center of everyone’s attention. I do not agree that the King paid much attention to these new colonists, because he was simply happy to have rid them from England, so that they could all continue their corruption in peace. Though I don’t see the King having a close eye on the Puritans, I do believe that other citizens of England, as well other countries, were very watchful. If this colony went well, they could pursue lives in the area in a parallel fashion. Puritans believed that they were chosen by God to purify the Church of England; they were to live by the laws of the bible, and not let the king interfere with God’s plan. This is the case for many churches that are formed in contemporary society. To this day, people choose to improve upon their church or religion, or branch off into what they feel is right. The case of the Puritans, however, was due to the corruption of England’s government, both the monarchy, and the hierarchy of the church itself.



Though they believe that their holy cause will lead them to the utmost success, this is not the cause, because economics become a huge problem, as well as surviving with limited help from England, who they broke away from. Puritan society focuses mainly on the religious purification of the Church of England. Monarchy in England led to the government dipping their greedy fingers into the church, for numerous sorts of personal gain. Not only this but the sects of the church themselves were using their powers within the church for their own personal growth. The Puritans chose to break of from this selfish alliance, so they spoke against it. After becoming fed up with their political and religious outcries, the King sent them away to form a colony, New England. All of this thought leads them to forget about what their true goal should be: the success of the colony itself. Without proper economic goals, they cannot survive, and they spend far too much time focusing on religion. This leads to numerous conflicts, such as the Salem Witch Trials, as well as the overall displays of public humiliation.



Puritan success is not nearly as evident as success in other colonies with different viewpoints. Colonies such as Virginia, whose main concerns are economic issues, have a much more positive stance in the colonial times. Tobacco and cotton, however blasphemous it is, seem to get you further than simple faith in the Lord. This is shown when Winthrop states that followers will say "the Lord make it like that of New England." Winthrop assumes that all others will simply trust in God to lead them to success. This idea does not sit well with me, because there is much more to this life than a belief of a higher entity. Economics is such a defining aspect of life, even in the times that Puritan society came about. If John Winthrop had merely opened his eyes, and broadened his views, he would see this. Clearly, the thought that God would lead them to achieve all that he wished to achieve was unwise.


John Winthrop completely overlooks the true nature of starting up a colony. They must survive off of their wits, and that trust in God does not always lead to direct victory on this earth. He did, however, do his job by psyching up all of his followers. They truly trusted his opinions, and followed him one hundred percent, in the beginning. Even though they tried to stray from corruption of their church, it did find a way into their society. Public humiliation was a large part of everyday life within the New England colony. This led to distrust of one another, and an implosion of the structure of their lives. They sought to become a better, holier alliance than the Church of England was, but ultimately failed. Triumph in God did not lead to success within the colony. With this all in mind, I think that John Winthrop let his role go to his head; they needed far more than just God’s approval, and the approval of others. If they had focused on what they were doing themselves, rather than what others would think of them, they could have succeeded on a far greater scale.

Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Essay #1 Reflection Post

How do you think you did?

I believe that I did fairly well on the essay. To me, it was both clear, concise, and well organized. Though some one of the sources (1/4) was not extremely credible, the essay, overall, was well written, and covered the standards for the history sheet. I should have used several more sources, and weeded out the ones that weren't necessary, which was rooted in our Wiki problem with annotations, which we simply did not do. If I'm being asked to grade myself using the np/lp/p/hp structure... I guess I'd give myself somewhere between lp and p, because I could really have used my time better. The essay, as a whole, could've been much better. Some of the essays that I read were truly better than mine, both in source material and overall structure, so I should strive to better my material usage and structuring as well.


What have you learned about your writing process and philosophy?

Writing using the 'They Say I Say' template made my job a lot easier. Without it, I believe that my essay, as a whole, would've been structured a lot looser, which could have resulted in an unclear, questionably worded essay, which I don't feel I ended up with. I used all of my knowledge of the 'They Say I Say' template, as well as a few others, and applied them directly to my writing, which increased my writing ability, I believe. Writing in the following order: Prewrite/think/Write/Rewrite/Revise, has been a structure that I've always loosely followed, since middle school, however, using it strictly helped me get my message across, I believe.

My philosophy mainly revolved around how often I wrote, so I guess this simply strengthened my case.


What have you learned about college writing vs. high school writing?

College writing is much more involved than high school writing. Writing at a college level requires much more research, whereas, in high school, it's all in a text book. This last essay forced me to look outside of the text book and search for other papers and readings with opinions on the topic that I was writing on. This isn't restricting, to say the least. I felt as though I was more free to do with my paper as I chose to do with it, even though there were fairly strict requirements that had to be met.


What changes will you make next time?

In the future, when using the Wiki, at least, I intend to annotate on the page. This will help both myself, and those around me. Also, I will make more time to write my essay. Making more time is always a goal of mine that I don't tend to follow through with. Though I end with decent papers, I feel as though, with more time, I could've done more, or at least made it easier on myself.

Thursday, October 18, 2007

Bacon's Rebellion: Fueled by Unstable Class Structure-Final Draft

There was an uneven distribution of power, land and wealth among the colonists in Virginia during the seventeenth century. This played a large role in the rebellion set into play by Nathanial Bacon. Land was quite scarce in the Chesapeake Bay region of Virginia, so those who had it were set apart from those who simply did not. Since land was not distributed evenly, most colonists at the time were impoverished, or just very poor. A wave of envy swept over those who did not have the wealth to buy land nor the land to acquire such wealth. This caused the high class citizens to fear for their property and their lives. (1) Both the lack of a middle class and the high class’ obvious majority in Virginian government added to the high class’ fear and the low class’ anger. The class structure at the time of Bacon’s Rebellion led to the rebellion itself, and also had a hand in the events to follow. Some major aspects of this class structure are alive in the United States, to this day.


Bacon’s Rebellion largely revolved around the feelings that both the lower class colonists and farmers had towards the upper class plantation owners. For the most part, the lower class citizens of Virginia hated the class above them. A major portion of that hatred was due to the fact that the class of each individual citizen was directly given to them by their parents. In other words, colonists at the time were born into either power or poverty. Their class, in the seventeenth century, rarely shifted up or down on the social hierarchy, especially within the confines of the Virginia colony. The commoners envied the wealthy, both for their land and money, as well as their places of power among the rest of the colony. From this envy, resentment blossomed. The majority of the colonists in Virginia, the poorer farmers, wished that they had more land; due to their status as un-wealthy citizens, they could not achieve such a feat. This caused frustration and anger among the lower class population.


Such ideas caused a deafening uproar of confusion, and the feeling of being taken advantage of. Nathanial Bacon seized this moment in time, when the colonists were so angry, to fuel his own rebellion. He knew that the poor farmers needed more land, and was well aware of how much land was untouched by Englishmen to the west; the land he spoke of was being ‘unproductively’ inhabited by the Natives. With these thoughts in mind, utilizing his own power in the government, Bacon rallied up many farmers and indentured servants and set off. Monica R. Gisolfi put it into words rather well when she wrote how Nathanial Bacon went through farmlands with his gang of poor colonists and “gather[ed] slaves and indentured servants to join them.”(1) This quote effectively displays how deeply the poor colonists’ hate dwelled within them; that Bacon and his band of followers could walk onto someone’s land and simply swipe them away from their work. It also shows how tightly knit the poor farmers and indentured servants were, because they had no bonds with the wealthy strong enough to stop them. Not only does it display how together the lower class was, but also the schism between the rich and poor.


Prosperous land was so sparse, so few planters were able to generate enough profit to be referred to as high class plantation owners. Due to this rough distribution of land there was no middle class to speak of. (2) Also, this was a main factor causing the poor to stay poor. Those underprivileged farmers had neither the land, nor the money to rise up the hierarchical social ranking of the Virginia colony. The lack of valuable land meant that low class had no land to significantly increase their profits. These facts lead them to being unable to buy more land, because the ratio of citizens to available land was so high. Land must have cost a lot more money, seeing as it was so sparingly distributed. Another effect of the lack of available land was that wealthy land owners made up a small percentage of the population. Thus, the majority of the population was impoverished. Lack of a middle class made life harder for the poor citizens of Virginia, because in order to rise up the ranks of society, they had to increase their revenue almost tenfold. As stated earlier, the lower class was unable to reach ‘wealthy’ status among the Virginians. Indentured servants who lived out their servitude became free man, which posed another problem, because they had no money to buy land. Such men and women were freed into poverty. Their dreams of a glorious life in the New World were crushed by their lack of money and residency, which did nothing but expand the gap between the rich and the poor, and raise the potential farmer to land ratio.


Another threat to Virginia’s class structure, and point that directly affected the rebellion was that the elite farmland owners tended to hold government offices. As studies have shown, in the eighteenth century, four out of five of Virginia’s House of Burgesses’ most prestigious men held more than 10,000 acres of land each.(3) Many lower class land owners viewed this distribution of power as a conflict of interest. In The American Dream, Bacon is said to have claimed that the “elite planters operated the government for private gain.”(4) Nathanial Bacon was speaking against such a dishonorable act in Chesapeake’s society. Obviously, the rich wished to be richer, thus taking advantage of their positions of power. This enraged many commoners, who strongly needed more land, which the officials would not allow them to have. The Governor at the time, Berkley, was singled out among those who unfairly used their power. Nathanial told his followers that the governor was denying them access to the Natives’ land solely because he held substantial trades with them. This would be yet another example of how unstable the Chesapeake society was during the seventeenth century, and how it directly contributed to Bacon’s Rebellion. Poor colonists could not control their own fates because the rich held governmental positions, and they sought to destroy that restraint.


Though the rebellion was eventually crushed, things did get better in Chesapeake. The colonists, both rich and poor, banded together to defeat the Indians. This was necessary because the Native Americans were retaliating due to the English intruding on their territories, and taking their land. One thing that did not change was the planter elites’ positions of power. Their power in the colony was not limited, however, after the rebellion. As The American Promise states, “If anything [Bacon’s Rebellion] strengthened their power.”(4) Whether their stronghold over the Chesapeake society was positive or remained negative is irrelevant to the argument of class structure’s importance in the aftermath of Bacon’s Rebellion. The important part that cannot be overlooked is that the grandees still held their land and power after such a violent rebellion was raised geared towards them losing both.
Society began to stabilize after the rebellion took place. One huge help to the cause was that the ratio of people to land began to lower. Reasons for this ratio’s slip included both the introduction of slavery and the dwindling of English immigrants due to better economy in England. Also, the Virginian government stopped enforcing, harshly, the encroachment into Indian territories. This led to less animosity between classes as free men got more land from the Natives. Indentured servants were no longer coming into the colony after slavery was introduced. Also, a middle class began to shape as slavery increased profits substantially. All of these facts lessened the tension between the lower and high class citizens of the Virginia colonies.


Today, the separations between high, low and middle classes are still very distinct. Middle class is the most common in rural areas, but even this class is vastly separated from the high class citizens. Those on the top of the tier, such as computer programmers, royalty, and media icons have much more wealth than the average person in a first world country, such as America or England. Though lifestyles have changed drastically, the rich are still envied by the poor. This is simply because they have more wealth, power, and land, like in the seventeenth century. Like colonists in Virginia, Americans today plainly wish to have more land, money, freedom and power. Technology and times have changed, but the American dream has not. It is not likely to ever change, even as society becomes more progressive; the want for high social status is in human nature, it is not a necessity, nor is it necessarily life dependent, but the want for more will always be there.


It is clear to see that social classes have had major effects in the American lifestyles since before the seventeenth century. Bacon’s Rebellion is a concrete example on how an unstable class structure can lead to a discontented society. In both seventeenth century Chesapeake Bay and the Americas today, class is viewed as the amount of wealth acquired over one’s lifetime. Even in the contemporary United States, many government officials are viewed as corrupt. Like in the seventeenth century, some are said to have ‘bought’ their way into their positions, and are even accused as creating laws solely to benefit themselves. Technology, clothing and shelter styles have all changed, but class has played, and most likely always will play, a large part in social content. The fluid class structure in seventeenth century Virginia took the leading role in Bacon’s Rebellion. There were other adding components, but the social hierarchy of poor farmers and rich planters no doubt took center stage.


(1) http://caho-test.cc.columbia.edu/sim/15005.html, Bacon's Rebellion: Colonial Society and Politics, 1972
(2) http://www.wm.edu/niahd/journals/index.php?browse=entry&id=440, Jacqueline Woods, 2004
(3) The Invention of the White Race, by Theodore W. Allen, 1998
(4) The American Promise, by James L. Roark, Michael P. Johnson, Patricia Cline Cohen, Sarah Stage, Alan Lawson, Susan M. Hartmann, 2005

Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Second Draft.

There was an uneven distribution of power, land and wealth among the colonists in Virginia during the seventeenth century. This played a large role in the rebellion set into play by Nathanial Bacon. Land was quite scarce in the Chesapeake Bay region of Virginia, so those who had it were set apart from those who simply did not. Since land was not distributed evenly, most colonists at the time were impoverished, or just very poor. A wave of envy swept over those who did not have the wealth to buy land nor the land to acquire such wealth. This caused the high class citizens to fear for their property and their lives. (1) Both the lack of a middle class and the high class’ obvious majority in Virginian government added to the high class’ fear and the low class’ anger. The class structure at the time of Bacon’s Rebellion led to the rebellion itself, and also had a hand in the events to follow. Some major aspects of this class structure is alive in the United States, to this day.


Bacon’s Rebellion largely revolved around the feelings that both the lower class colonists and farmers had towards the upper class plantation owners. For the most part, the lower class citizens of Virginia hated the class above them. A major portion of that hatred was due to the fact that the class of each individual citizen was directly given to them by their parents. In other words, colonists at the time were born into either power or poverty. Their class, in the seventeenth century, rarely shifted up or down on the social hierarchy, especially within the confines of the Virginia colony. The commoners envied the wealthy, both for their land and money, as well as their places of power among the rest of the colony. From this envy, resentment blossomed. The majority of the colonists in Virginia, the poorer farmers, wished that they had more land; due to their status as un-wealthy citizens, they could not achieve such a feat. This caused frustration and anger among the lower class population.


Such ideas caused a deafening uproar of confusion, and the feeling of being taken advantage of. Nathanial Bacon seized this moment in time, when the colonists were so angry, to fuel his own rebellion. He knew that the poor farmers needed more land, and was well aware of how much land was untouched by Englishmen to the west; the land he spoke of was being ‘unproductively’ inhabited by the Natives. With these thoughts in mind, utilizing his own power in the government, Bacon rallied up many farmers and indentured servants and set off. Monica R. Gisolfi put it into words rather well when she wrote how Nathanial Bacon went through farmlands with his gang of poor colonists and “gather[ed] slaves and indentured servants to join them.”(1) This quote effectively displays how deeply the poor colonists’ hate dwelled within them; that Bacon and his band of followers could walk onto someone’s land and simply swipe them away from their work. It also shows how tightly knit the poor farmers and indentured servants were, because they had no bonds with the wealthy strong enough to stop them. Not only does it display how together the lower class was, but also the schism between the rich and poor.


Prosperous land was so sparse, so few planters were able to generate enough profit to be referred to as high class plantation owners. Due to this rough distribution of land there was no middle class to speak of. (2) Also, this was a main factor causing the poor to stay poor. Those underprivileged farmers had neither the land, nor the money to rise up the hierarchical social ranking of the Virginia colony. The lack of valuable land meant that low class had no land to significantly increase their profits. These facts lead them to being unable to buy more land, because the ratio of citizens to available land was so high. Land must have cost a lot more money, seeing as it was so sparingly distributed. Another effect of the lack of available land was that wealthy land owners made up a small percentage of the population. Thus, the majority of the population was impoverished. Lack of a middle class made life harder for the poor citizens of Virginia, because in order to rise up the ranks of society, they had to increase their revenue almost tenfold. As stated earlier, the lower class was unable to reach ‘wealthy’ status among the Virginians. Indentured servants who lived out their servitude became free man, which posed another problem, because they had no money to buy land. Such men and women were freed into poverty. Their dreams of a glorious life in the New World were crushed by their lack of money and residency, which did nothing but expand the gap between the rich and the poor, and raise the potential farmer to land ratio.


Another threat to Virginia’s class structure, and point that directly affected the rebellion was that the elite farmland owners tended to hold government offices. As studies have shown, in the eighteenth century, four out of five of Virginia’s House of Burgesses’ most prestigious men held more than 10,000 acres of land each.(3) Many lower class land owners viewed this distribution of power as a conflict of interest. In The American Dream, Bacon is said to have claimed that the “elite planters operated the government for private gain.”(4) Nathanial Bacon was speaking against such a dishonorable act in Chesapeake’s society. Obviously, the rich wished to be richer, thus taking advantage of their positions of power. This enraged many commoners, who strongly needed more land, which the officials would not allow them to have. The Governor at the time, Berkley, was singled out among those who unfairly used their power. Nathanial told his followers that the governor was denying them access to the Natives’ land solely because he held substantial trades with them. This would be yet another example of how unstable the Chesapeake society was during the seventeenth century, and how it directly contributed to Bacon’s Rebellion. Poor colonists could not control their own fates because the rich held governmental positions, and they sought to destroy that restraint.


Though the rebellion was eventually crushed, things did got better in Chesapeake. The colonists, both rich and poor, banded together to defeat the Indians. This was necessary because the Native Americans were retaliating due to the English intruding on their territories, and taking their land. One thing that did not change was the planter elites’ positions of power. Their power in the colony was not limited, however, after the rebellion. As The American Promise states, “If anything [Bacon’s Rebellion] strengthened their power.”(4) Whether their stronghold over the Chesapeake society was positive or remained negative is irrelevant to the argument of class structure’s importance in the aftermath of Bacon’s Rebellion. The important part that cannot be overlooked is that the grandees still held their land and power after such a violent rebellion was raised geared towards them losing both.


Society began to stabilize after the rebellion took place. One huge help to the cause was that the ratio of people to land began to lower. Reasons for this ratio’s slip included both the introduction of slavery and the dwindling of English immigrants due to better economy in England. Also, the Virginian government stopped enforcing, harshly, the encroachment into Indian territories. This led to less animosity between classes as free men got more land from the Natives. Indentured servants were no longer coming into the colony after slavery was introduced. Also, a middle class began to shape as slavery increased profits substantially. All of these facts lessened the tension between the lower and high class citizens of the Virginia colonies.


Today, the separations between high, low and middle classes are still very distinct. Middle class is the most common in rural areas, but even this class is vastly separated from the high class citizens. Those on the top of the tier, such as computer programmers, royalty, and media icons have much more wealth than the average person in a first world country, such as America or England. Though lifestyles have changed drastically, the rich are still envied by the poor. This is simply because they have more wealth, power, and land, like in the seventeenth century. Like colonists in Virginia, Americans today plainly wish to have more land, money, freedom and power. Technology and times have changed, but the American dream has not. It is not likely to ever change, even as society becomes more progressive; the want for high social status is in human nature, it is not a necessity, nor is it necessarily life dependent, but the want for more will always be there.


(1) http://caho-test.cc.columbia.edu/sim/15005.html, Bacon's Rebellion: Colonial Society and Politics, 1972
(2) http://www.wm.edu/niahd/journals/index.php?browse=entry&id=440, Jacqueline Woods, 2004
(3) The Invention of the White Race, by Theodore W. Allen, 1998
(4) The American Promise, by James L. Roark, Michael P. Johnson, Patricia Cline Cohen, Sarah Stage, Alan Lawson, Susan M. Hartmann, 2005

Monday, October 15, 2007

About Next Post

My essay doesn't have all of the quotes in it, yet. I put it together with what I knew was going in there... then added 'filler' information... basically, everything other than the main ideas are on the cutting-board. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE criticize my work. I need to know what DOES NOT WORK. Thank you.

Bacon’s Rebellion: Fueled by Unstable Class Structure

Bacon’s Rebellion largely revolved around the feelings that the lower class colonists and farmers had towards the upper class land owners. For the most part, the lower class citizens of Virginia hated the class above them. A major portion of that hatred was due to the fact that the class of each individual citizen was directly given to them by their parents. In other words, you were born into either power or poverty. You class, in the seventeenth century, rarely shifted up or down on the social hierarchy, especially within the confines of the Virginia colony. The commoners envied the wealthy, both for their land and money, as well as their places of power among the rest of the colony. From this envy, resentment blossomed. The majority of the colonists in Virginia, the poorer farmers, wished that they had more land, but, due to their status’ as unwealthy citizens, they could not achieve such a feat. This caused frustration and anger among the lower class population.



Nathanial Bacon seized this moment in time, when the colonists were so angry, to fuel his own rebellion. He knew that the poor farmers needed more land. He was also aware of how much land was untouched by Englishmen to the west, and was being unproductively inhabited by the Natives. With these thoughts in mind, utilizing his own power in the government, Bacon rallied up many farmers and indentured servants and set off. Monica R. Gisolfi put it into words rather well when she wrote how Nathanial Bacon went through farmlands with his gang of poor colonists and “gather[ed] slaves and indentured servants to join them.” Upon analysis of this quote, you see how effectively it displays how deeply the poor colonists’ hate dwelled within them; that Bacon and his band of followers could walk onto someone’s land and simply swipe them away from their work. It also shows how tightly knit the poor farmers and indentured servants were, because they had no bonds with the wealthy strong enough to stop them. Not only does it display how together the lower class was, but also the schism between the rich and poor.



Since prosperous land was so sparse, few planters were able to generate enough profit to be referred to as high class, wealthy plantation owners. Due to this rough distribution of land there was no middle class to speak of. Also, this was a main factor causing the poor to stay poor. Those underprivileged farmers had neither the land, nor the money to rise up the hierarchical social ranking of the Virginia colony. The lack of valuable land meant that low class had no land to significantly increase their profits. These facts lead them to being unable to buy more land, because the ratio of citizens to available land was so high. Land must have cost a lot more money, seeing as it was so sparingly distributed.Another effect of the lack of available land was that wealthy land owners made up a small percentage of the population. Thus, the majority of the population was impoverished. The lack of a middle class made life harder for the poor citizens of Virginia. As stated earlier, the lower class was unable to reach ‘wealthy’ status among the Virginians. Indentured servants who lived out their servitude became free man, which posed another problem, because they had no money to buy land. Such men and women were freed into poverty. Their dreams of a glorious life in the New World were crushed by their lack of money and residency. This did nothing but expand the gap between the rich and the poor, and raise the potential farmer to land ratio.



The small percentage of wealthy land owners tended to be government officials. Many lower class land owners viewed this distribution of power as a conflict of interest. In The American Dream, Bacon is said to have claimed that the “elite planters operated the government for private gain.” Nathanial Bacon was speaking against such a dishonorable act in Chesapeake’s society. Obviously, the rich wished to be richer, thus taking advantage of their positions of power. This angered many commoners, who strongly needed more land, which the officials would not allow them to have. The Governor at the time, Berkley, was singled out. Nathanial told his followers that he was denying them access to the Natives’ land solely because he held substantial trades with them. This would be yet another example of how unstable the Chesapeake society was during the seventeenth century, and how it directly contributed to Bacon’s Rebellion; the poor could not control their own fates because the rich held governmental positions, and they sought to destroy that chokehold over them.


Though the rebellion was eventually crushed, things did got better in Chesapeake. The colonists, both rich and poor, banded together to defeat the Indians. This was necessary because the Native Americans were retaliating due to the English intruding on their territories, and taking their land. One thing that did not change, was the planter elites’ positions of power. Their power in the colony was not limited, however, after the rebellion. As The American Promise states, “If anything [Bacon’s Rebellion] strengthened their power.” Whether their stronghold over the Chesapeake society was positive or remained negative is irrelevant to the argument of class structure’s importance in the aftermath of Bacon’s Rebellion. The important part that cannot be overlooked is that the grandees still held their land and power after such a violent rebellion was raised geared towards them losing both.


Society began to stabilize after the rebellion took place. One huge help to the cause was that the ratio of people to land began to lower. This led to less animosity between classes as free men got more land from the Natives. Indentured servants were no longer coming into the colony after slavery was introduced. Increase of land helped many freed servants acquire residency and farmland. Also, a middle class began to shape as slavery increased profits substantially. All of these facts lessened the tension between the lower and high class citizens of the Virginia colonies.

Sunday, October 7, 2007

My Pre-Draft is Seven

Bacon's rebellion had much to do with social classes. The higher up, richer farmers were making more money than the poor or middle class, after trade was cut from bad indians. Only the richest could trade with the indians (as I come to understand... check fact) so the poor or middle class gained less profit on their already second rate land. Indentured servants were becoming free, and becoming these poor farmers, who helped fuel the rebellion. Nathanial Bacon was a trouble making schemer, and devised a plan to overthrow Berkley's reign by saying that his decisions to not bother with the Natives were impure, because he was making a substantial profit from them.

Robert Beverly, "On Bacon's Rebellion"

also

Bacon's Declaration to the People

Stretch that to be five pages.

Thursday, October 4, 2007

Tobacco: Thank Goodness It's 6

Tobacco is often shown as harmful to the nation, but history shows that if the tobacco industry hadn't boomed in the 1600s, the United States may have never been formed. Sites such as 'thetruth.com' tell their audience that without tobacco, the world would be better off. Though it is true that smoking is harmful to peoples' health, it did kick-started the US into becoming a nation. In the 1600s, tobacco became a luxury in England. Due to both increasing supply and demand, growing tobacco and selling it to England was Virginia's main exported commodity. It made Virginia more money than any other trade item, such as Indian (native) artwork. Tobacco farms also brought over many people to both own farms, or become indentured servants to work the fields. Due to it's highly addictive nature, England celebrated the use of tobacco. Smoking, snuffing, as well as numerous other uses of tobacco, became very popular in the 1600s, and are still around today. I do not believe that tobacco is healthy, nor do I believe that everybody should smoke. I'm merely stating that tobacco has helped this nation greatly, at least, in the beginning.

Does Tobacco Deserve Our Respect: Auto-Six

Despite that tobacco is often shown as hurtful to the nation, I've noticed that if the tobacco industry hadn't began in the 1600s, the United States may have never been formed.

Tobacco is often shown as harmful to the nation, but history shows that if the tobacco industry hadn't boomed in the 1600s, the United States may have never been formed. Sites such as 'thetruth.com' tell their audience that without tobacco, the world would be better off. Though it is true that smoking is harmful to peoples' health, it kick-started the US into becoming a nation. In the 1600s, tobacco became a luxury in England. Due to increasing supply and demand, tobacco

Wednesday, October 3, 2007

The Alternate Reality of Gaming: Blog the Fifth

Imagine an interactive game so involved that you find it hard to discern reality from what you're told. A game where your goals are accomplished using both body and mind, in the real world; where information is gathered by persistence, patience, and the ability to navigate through media to find what you're looking for. That thought would be the general overview of most ARGs, or Alternative Reality Games. Dive headfirst into a worldwide... puzzle? No. Game? No, this is not a game, this is alternate reality. A bit over the top, maybe, but you get the idea. In today's world, where gaming is a billion dollar industry, to see something so interactive take place is breathtaking. Everything is becoming automatic, digitized, and thus easy, (or just E-Z.) I have been interested in ARGs ever since I found out about the I Love Bees phenomena, which interest many more than just Halo fans, and wish to see more flourish. Many people are shocked, uninterested in, or even put off by the amount of involvement necessary to "play" one of these games, but I greatly respect those in charge of creating such a complex masterpiece, as well as those who can follow the plot and solve puzzles along the way.

The reason Craig would assign this reading, (besides being a bit of a gamer,) is to show how important the writing process is no matter what field you're working (or playing) in. Think about it; these people create puzzles, websites, and articles that look so real that . I think that the ability to write something that catches the attention of people so many people is amazing. I'm not even sure as to what else I should write, because I seem to be repeating myself. So, I'll leave you with this question in mind: Where does reality end, and the game begin?

Monday, October 1, 2007

JUSTaMOMENTinTIME: fourth

________There's a feeling that you get when you help someone who truly neds that help. It's a feeling that nears unexplainable, but I'll give it a shot anyways.
________The man whose house Ben's group went to was incredibly nice and well mannered, which was a bit far from how he was explained by the charity service. He spoke to the group and I often, and thanked us numerous times. Every time he thanked us, a feeling arose inside me. This feeling overpowered the exhaustion of lifting heavy objects, breathing in vast amounts of dust, and searching for spare boxes in the Ace Hardware dumpster. To be completely honest, I wasn't too thrilled about the charity work at the beginning. I was very nervous, because I thought I wouldn't be able to help as much as I might want to, or that I wouldn't be able to meet the expectations of others in my group or at the house. The main reason I was happy to help, in the beginning, was because it would give me hours of community service, and future employers would be ecstatic if they saw that, but it became so much more. It wasn't about the hours, it was about the feeling. I could say it again and again (and again,) that feeling was amazing. To be completely cliché, it warmed my heart, and I felt as though I was on top of the world. This is the first time in my life that I truly felt that something I did impacted the community, but, here at PSEC, I'm sure it won't be my last.